Wednesday, 1 July 2009

The University life(revised)

Hello. Let me introduce about university life. These days, more and more people go to university. It is become normally to go to there recently. At university there are many students and they really enjoying their life one's way. They are so different way to spend university life, some are studying harder, others are keen on spending in clubs, so tell you about student university life.

Firstly, there is several ways for them to come to school. Some students come to school by bicycle, so the most universities have parking lot for bicycles. There are many bicycles there and also student who come to school by motor bike park in parking lot for motor bikes. Other students come to school by on foot. These guys almost live in dormitory or live in near their university. There are also many students who come to university by car, these guys live in far from their university, so there is several ways to come to school.

Secondly, at lunch time, students also have many way to eating. Some student bring lunchbox to the school, these guys live with their parents, dormitory students and living alone students rarely bring lunchbox. Other students buy some food in the bakery or Gakusyoku or convenience store. These students are the most seen in university, so you can see several ways for their lunch in the university.

Finally, students' thinking is different. Some students study very hard. They study many things in the library or bakery, anywhere. IN the university there is much equipment to improve student's skills; they use it and studying harder. Other students are keen on doing activities in their club. They really enjoy their activities and make a good memory for the future. Thus, in university there are many way to spend their students' life.

There are many students in the university, but everyone enjoy their life in their own way. (317 words)

1 comment:

ASAMI said...

Hi. I read your essay. I think that students' thinking is different each too.
I think it is better to add a problem definition to improve your essay.